介绍上海英语作文带翻译(介绍某个城市英语作文范文)

一、看图作文

1.假设你是王虹,你的美国笔友Mike想了解一下北京、上海这两座城市,请你根据下表提示并结合所学地理知识给Mike写一封信,向他介绍一下这两座城市。

要求:

1. 包含提示内容,可适当发挥,但不要逐字翻译;

2. 80词左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

北京

1. 中国的首都;

2. 人口约2千万,面积约16,410平方公里;

3. 有许多名胜古迹。

上海

1. 中国最大的现代都市;

2. 人口约2千3百万,面积约6,340平方公里;

3. 2010年举办世博会 (The World Expo)。

Dear Mike,

I’m very glad to tell you something about Beijing and Shanghai.

I hope you can visit China soon.

Yours,

Wang Hong

2.以“My best friend”为题写一篇60词左右的英语短文。内容要点提示如下:

姓名是Lihua、相貌特征、认识了多长时间、共同爱好、在一起做过什么有意义的事等等。

My best friend

参考答案

1.

One possible version:

Dear Mike,

I’m very glad to tell you something about Beijing and Shanghai.

Beijing is the capital city of China. The population of Beijing is about 20 million. It covers about 16,410 square kilometres. There are lots of places of interest in Beijing, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace.

Shanghai is the biggest city in China. It is a modern city. There’re about 23 million people in Shanghai. It covers about 6,340 square kilometres. The World Expo was held in Shanghai in 2010. Have you ever heard of it?

I hope you can visit China soon.

Yours,

Wang Hong

【解析】

试题分析:

这是一篇给材料作文,介绍北京和上海两座大城市。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Beijing is ......;The population of Beijing is ......;There are......;The World Expo was......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达希望好友来北京参观的愿望。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头告诉自己的朋友要介绍北京和上海,接下来介绍北京和上海的特点,最后希望好友来中国参观。此处用了The population of ,places of interest, heard of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点:提纲作文。

2.

My best friend

I have a good friend. She is a Chinese girl. Her Chinese name is Lihua and her English name is Lucy. She is 15 years old now. She is from Shandong. She studies at No. 10 middle School. She is in Class Two, Grade Eight. We have known each other for two years. We all like singing and matching TV. She is very kind and friendly. We always go to my uncle’s countryside together to help with the farmwork. What a good girl! I like her.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内容,可知本文主要用第三人称,一般现在时态进行叙述,注意主谓一致问题。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单。如She is……;……years old……岁;be from来自;each other彼此;help with sth帮忙做某事等学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点:考查提纲类作文

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