学生原文04.
My parents decided to take me on a trip to Shanghai. So now I'm. Looking forward to this trip I was so excited about this trip. Shanghai is one of the international big cities in the world after we arrived in Shanghai. We first went to see the oriental Pearl TV tower and then we went to see the bund. It was so beautiful night views here I spend some time admiring it The night views you usually performed by some lights, Over the next few days we tasted some classic Shanghai snacks. I was sun, I was so happy about the visit I hope I will visit it again in the future.
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My parents decided to take me on a trip to Shanghai.I was looking forward to this trip. Shanghai is one of the international cities in the world. After we arrived in Shanghai, we went to see the Oriental Pearl TV Tower first.I went to the observatory floor to have a bird’s eyes view of the whole Shanghai. Then we went to the Bund. The colourful lights made its night views so beautiful that I spent quite a little time admiring it. Over the next few days, we tasted some local Shanghai snacks. I was so happy. I hope I will visit it again in the future.
翻译:
我父母决定带我去上海旅行。我很期待这次旅行。上海是世界上的国际城市之一。到达上海后,我们先去看东方明珠电视塔。我去了天文台,鸟瞰了整个上海。然后我们去了外滩。五颜六色的灯光使它的夜景如此美丽,以至于我花了不少时间欣赏它。在接下来的几天里,我们品尝了一些上海当地的小吃。我太高兴了。我希望将来能再去看看。
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